Peer feedback on music video.

Each group watched each others music videos and gave feedback on the video at this stage. The feedback that was given to our group was

"Long shot -too lengthy (untitled  1-10-1)

Include Joe in it a bit

Good feel to piece"

"Long black out at 46 seconds (1-11-1)"

"Promoting violence and strange product placement"

As one of the members making this film it was a little frustrating reading the feedback because there are general, inevitable reasons for some of the comments made. for example there is only one shot of Joe in the film because we have yet to film the rest of his parts yet. Also the 'promoting violence' is the point of the video, to show that if you live in Hackney, that is what you will grow up around and become interested in. The 'strange product placement' isn't a big deal because they are not the highlight of the shots. There were only two situations with this. one of them is the shot of the traffic moving fast in which your attention would be drawn more to the cars than the specific surroundings. The second one is when we were showing the nature of graffiti amongst the community that was on a pet shop shutter. The shop name was clearly in the shot which i agree is very obvious but i would not say has a great impact taking away the focus of the graffiti.